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The Edwards Family's Herfordshire Estate - Part 4

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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 1:59 am

Colin looks over at Micah

Colin:"That little extra something Jenny threw in...when I give the signal, whatever it is...make it happen."

Colin slowly stands up

Colin:"PEOPLE! Hear me! What has this man truly done for you?"

he points to a random woman in the crowd

Colin:"What did you have to give to the light to be here?"

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:00 am

Woman: Seventy Five thousand dollars.
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:01 am

Colin:"And what has Nuala done with your money? What benefits have you received?"

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:03 am

Woman: I...I got this robe....and...and a thank you, a vanilla coke and a big smile.

Nuala: Cheryl, I gave you more than that!

Cheryl: OH....and a handshake.
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:06 am

He cups the womans hands in his, looking into her eyes

Colin:"And, my dear, do you feel that has been worth seventy five thousand dollars? Do you feel fulfilled?"

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:08 am

Cheryl: ...No....no, hell the sex wasn't even that good...

Caley: You...had sex...with...her?

Nuala: I had to. I was commanded...
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:12 am

Colin:"Intriguing..."

he steps back on the podium

Colin:"Show of hands, who here gave thousands of dollars and had sex with Nuala, the man claiming to be the true light?"

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:13 am

About eighty women hold up thier hands....and about twenty guys...
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:16 am

Colin's eyes widen for a moment

Colin:"Uh...Show of hands, who here feels fulfilled by what Nuala has 'provided' you?"

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:21 am

Some people keep thier hands up...

Nuala: See....? I know what these people need. I provide hope for them. What have you done....to be concidered for my job?

Caley: But...you promised me....

Nuala: SHUT UP!
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:23 am

Colin glances at Caley and Nuala, before bring his attention back to the crowd,
he points to somebody with their hand still up


Colin:"And what is it that Nuala provided for you?"

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:27 am

Nuala fires the gun in the air...

Nuala: Enough of this 'twenty questions' bullshit! No...I will consoldate my power....right. now. Colin....I'm going to shoot you, Lauren and Micah...and I then will be unchallenged.

He levels the gun at Colin, aims...and...

*BANG!*

There is silence....dead silence. Colin is...unharmed....because Caley has taken the shot in her back...
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:36 am

Colin stands in shock, thinking he's been shot.
But...there is no pain. He feels his chest, expecting to feel the warmth of blood seeping through the robe. His hands are dry though.
He looks down and sees Caley slumped to the floor. He immediately drops down, grabbing her and pulling her behind the alter with Micah and Amber.
He looks at her, still holding her, his robe soaked in her blood. He speaks, trying to sound reassuring, and he is actually genuine


Colin:"You're going to be alright, you're going to be alright"

theres something deep down that makes him care about this woman, despite everything, and in a sudden jolt that has shot out of the depth hitting him hard

Colin:"You're going to be fine."

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:43 am

Caley: N...no son. I....it's m......my time. At least.....At least I go...t.....to be with...you....one more......tim...e...
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:51 am

Colin tears up

Colin:"No...not like this...not like this..."

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:53 am

Caley's eyes start to close...

Caley: I...know I w...asn't.....th...e...be..st...mothe...r....but....I...alway...s....lloved you....My son. Please....tell....your fath...er...and...Mo...ira....I....

....I'm.....sorry. For everything...

With that Caley closes her eyes and stops breathing...
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:59 am

Colin:"No....no..."

he shakes her

Colin:"Please, no mom. Please come back"

he looks at Micah, desperation and sadness in his eyes pleading to them

Colin:"Please...please help her please...please..."

he looks back at her, holding her close against her

Colin:"I love you mom. I love you."

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:01 am

Micah: Colin....I....Brother....she's....she's gone.

Lauren makes a call and in the next moment, FBI agents and M.I.6 agents are swarming the place. They take Nuala into custody...
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:05 am


About forty minutes, after questioning,
Colin sits alone on the cathedral steps, wrapped in a blanket, a deep sadness in his eyes as he looks just past the dirt under his feet in silence. His face soaked in tears

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:10 am

Lauren approaches him and hands him a cup of coffee...

Lauren: Well, Nuala is going to be charged with a myrriad of things...including first degree murder. It seems that all of this is finally over.

She sits next to him...

Lauren: Micah is still being questioned. Need a sounding board for right now?
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:14 am

Colins voice is faint, cracking

Colin:"I....could have saved her. I know it...I could have gotten her the help she needed....All the professional help that she required....She....why did she have to die?"

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:02 pm

Lauren: I'm sorry Colin...but I think....she wanted to do that for you. She...loved you, Colin. You were all she could talk about. She told me...you were the only thing she did right.
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Post  Jabberwocky Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:07 pm

Colin:"She...didn't need to take a bullet for me to forgive her. She didn't..."
he feels himself choke up
Colin:"The one moment where I truly felt like I could call her mom and..and..I'll never see her again..."

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Post  Cryonix Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:20 pm

Micah walks over to Colin and gives him a hug....

Micah: Hey...hey. It's alright man. Cry...you need to.

He lets Colin cry on his shoulder. As he does, he calls Amanda...

Micah: ...Suprise, honey.
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Post  Cruel Britannia Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:22 pm

Amanda picks up in one ring.

Amanda: OhMyGodGodMicahAreYouOKIsItOverIMissYouSoMuchSweetie.
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